Monday, July 20, 2009

546...Stockwell Day Cuts And Pastes

Last week it was the Westside Weekly; this week it is the Penticton Herald but the op ed is the same, same fractured grammar, confusing syntax, ah, we love you Jet Ski Boy.

Plus the op ed for the Penticton bird cage liner was stale dated, referring to the Merritt Mountain Music Festival as happening last weekend. Actually, it was two weekends ago and, yes, I am nitpicking.

Voila:

"And in case any of you country music fans missed it, the Merritt Mountain Music Festival was a huge hit this past weekend. I was there for the opening and got to meet Paul Brandt. He and the rest of the great line-up with the likes of Kenny Chesney, wowed the crowd (hey, that rhymes) all weekend long."

You are a minister, Jet Ski Boy, hire some staff, freshen up and accurate up the prose.

WFDS

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